Rather good with one or two distractions.
A tendancy to explain too much. On one page I found WAM and some other items explained twice each withword for word identical titled paragraphs. And do we really need to be told a rope climbing skill is used to climb a rope?
You never gave us the promised starting characters. Just character sheets with no names attributes, skillls or other identification at all.
Uh, Of is spelled with an o, not an i. Admittedly my spell checker insists I misspell a lot, but a two letter word?